11.08.09
Bored to death by Death’s Daughter
I picked up Amber Benson’s 2009 paperback release, Death’s Daughter, from the library because A)I enjoyed her as Tara on Buffy the Vampire Slayer and B)I loved her Ghosts of Albion books co-authored with Christopher Golden. Unfortunately (and you know it can’t be good when I start a sentence with that), Death’s Daughter disappointed mightily. Just from a story structure and writing standpoint, it became clear that while Benson is a good “idea person,” her execution is off. It seems Golden did much of the heavy lifting in that department during their collaboration.
The story itself is pretty standard and derivative, given the wealth of paranormal/urban fantasy saturating the market these days. Calliope Reaper-Jones, home & garden company employee, gets pulled back into the complex world of Death, Inc when her father, the current Grim Reaper, and his board members are kidnapped. Wackiness ensues.
And maybe I wouldn’t be so turned off to the book if said wackiness didn’t involve borrowing from Hindu mythology. It’s not that I mind the cribbing, per se. Christopher Pike did it for his Last Vampire series and I loved that. It’s how Benson chose to play fast and loose with the characterization of some Hindu figures — primarily Kali. She’s described as a temperamental sari-wearing young woman who constantly calls Calliope “White Girl.” Um…really? No. 1. If Benson had chosen to have her use Hindi and dub Callie “memsahib” or “sahiba” it would’ve made much more sense. No. 2. Kali isn’t exactly your bitchtastic high school mean girl. Out of all the goddesses in the pantheon, she’s the least likely to fit into that slot that Benson placed her in. It really rubbed me the wrong way. And tangentially, why would you pick a goddess whose name is so close to your heroine’s?
The book just didn’t “get there.” There’s too much packed into too few pages, not enough actual character development — Callie is so vapid I couldn’t even empathize with her — and what there is of a love interest plot was very convoluted. Of course, it was also the clear set-up for a series. Yep, that’s right, we get more. If Kali returns in the sequel, remind me not to have alcohol handy, because I’d be too tempted to do shots every time she calls Callie something other than her name.
Thankfully, I cleansed my literary palate by reading Saving Francesca, by Melina Marchetta. Now that was a worthwhile read, with a fully developed heroine!
10.31.09
Never Deceive a Duke, by Liz Carlyle
Liz Carlyle’s 2008 release Never Deceive a Duke, leaves me with the same conundrum as Wicked All Day did: I can’t figure out what the title has to do with anything. Yes, there is a duke, but who’s doing the deceiving? Not that I’m necessarily in favor of titles that tell you exactly what’s going on. If it were a standard Harlequin category romance, it would probably be called The Jewish Duke’s Widowed Secret Lover or something.
Yes, you read that right: Gabriel Gareth Lloyd, the hero of a historical romance, is Jewish. For that alone, I picked up the book, because there is a dearth of historical romance featuring anybody but your standard Christian rakes (and the half-Indian, half-Gypsy “exotic” rakes, of course). The story didn’t disappoint at all…even if the set-up reminded me a little of Carlyle’s A Woman Scorned.
Gareth Lloyd has worked with Neville Shipping for years, shutting his dark past away, but then his cousin, the Duke of Warneham, dies under suspicious circumstances. With four wives under the duke’s belt and no children, the only person left to inherit the title and the estates is Gareth. When he begrudgingly takes on the responsibility, he meets the duchess Antonia, a fragile 26-year-old, whom everyone suspects may have killed her much older husband.
Never Deceive a Duke is about reckoning with grief, about reconciling one’s past, and having the courage to move on. And Gareth’s Jewish heritage — his father was disowned for marrying Ruth and after their deaths, Gareth was raised by her parents — is a key part of that theme. I loved when he explained the concept of shiva to Antonia, assuring her that there is no shame in giving mourning its due. Despite being brought up by the Gottfrieds, at least until terrible tragedies struck and changed his life forever, Gareth is more or less raised Christian. Or at least secular. Which makes sense, given the era. His mother wanted him to be able to conform to his father’s world. But as Gareth tells Antonia, in his heart he’s absolutely Jewish. And the reader gets glimpses of that in the form of flashbacks to a wee Gabriel with his “Bubbe” and “Zayde.”
It’s a great concept, and a wonderful way to diversify the romantic historical canvas. Speaking of diversification, there is also the inclusion of Carlyle’s recurring character, George Kemble. International man of mystery, interior decorator, valet…is there anything he can’t do? A particular scene between Gareth, Kemble and Rothewell (the hero of Never Romance a Rake) had me laughing out loud on the subway. Kemble’s sexuality is not explicitly stated in this book, but he’s definitely gay (which I confirmed upon reading an earlier Carlyle work, The Devil To Pay). And I appreciated that Carlyle draws no link between that and some of the horrors* Gareth experienced as a youth. Too many romance authors use homosexuality as a villainous device that goes hand-in-hand with child abuse. It’s despicable and irresponsible.
Carlyle’s Never Deceive a Duke is anything but that. And with both Gareth and Kemble, she reboots the idea of what a romance novel hero “should be.” Here’s hoping more authors follow her lead.
*Just a warning that, yes, this book does discuss issues of rape in pretty stark terms, so steer clear if you’re triggered by such things.
10.22.09
Jellicoe Road, by Melina Marchetta
Sometimes, when a book or a move are overhyped, I brace for impact, expecting my experience with it to be a letdown. Thankfully, this was not the case with Melina Marchetta’s critically acclaimed Jellicoe Road, which was released in 2006 in Australia and then in 2008 here in the States —interestingly enough, the Australian release is called On The Jellicoe Road, and I have no idea why they dropped the preposition. The book is at points both stark and dream-like, and Marchetta does a wonderful job of balancing wistful, almost ethereal, instances of then with sturdier, wry instances of now. And she also pulls no punches with the issues of violence, death and abuse.
Taylor Markham has lived at the Jellicoe School ever since her junkie mother dumped her off at a 7/11 and left her to be cared for by the mysterious Hannah, who has a house near the school’s property. Every year, the kids from the Jellicoe School fight a war for territory with the Townies and the Cadets who camp nearby for a term. When it comes Taylor’s turn to lead, stories that hold the key to her past follow. Tough to the point of almost reveling in her solitude, Taylor’s journey on the Jellicoe Road opens her up to surprising friendships, a romance and learning what family means to her.
It’s hard to talk about the book without giving too much away, because part of the joy of reading it was making each connection and having an “ah-ha!” moment. And I want to go back and reread it over and over to catch the things I didn’t grab the first time around. In fact, while reading I kept flipping back to check things. It’s a book that made me laugh, that made my throat tighten up, and also really engaged my brain.
This copy has to go back to the library, but I’m definitely buying my own as soon as possible, so that I may travel down the Jellicoe Road with Marchetta’s memorable characters and engaging story over and over again.
10.19.09
A week in reading: more quick hits
Love You Hate You Miss You – This stark, first person POV novel about Amy, a problem drinker, is more on Elizabeth’s Scott “rip out your spleen” side of the spectrum than her lighter funny, charming, coming of age tales. The reader meets Amy as she finishes a stint in rehab, still reeling from the drunk driving crash that killed her best friend, the impulsive, wild and wonderful Julia. Throughout the course of the novel, I found myself wondering if Amy was a reliable narrator, if the Julia she saw was the Julia who really existed, and whether her downward spiral was actually enabled by this friend who seemed so much more alive than she is. I tend to think those are questions that Scott puts out there on purpose, and that the emotional journey we see Amy take is about answering them. Like many of Scott’s other books, Amy’s parents’ absenteeism is a huge element, but unlike her other books, it’s something faced head on, and we see the parents actually trying to change…and also showing us that how Amy views them may not be correct. In fact, there’s a key conversation they have with Amy near the end that made me cry. This 2009 release is painful and human and a wonderful read.
A Woman Scorned – I picked up Liz Carlyle’s 2000 novel A Woman Scorned because it’s one of the precursors to this year’s release, Wicked All Day. I so enjoyed Jonet and Cole as Stuart and Robin’s parents that I wanted to see how they met and fell in love. A Woman Scorned did not disappoint! When former soldier and divinity scholar Cole Amherst is dispatched by a suspicious relative to tutor Lady Jonet Rowland’s children, it’s hate at first sight! Though an attraction is immediate as well, newly widowed Jonet doesn’t trust a soul and Cole is put off by her sharp tongue and dismissive manner. A Woman Scorned follows them as they learn to live with each other, trust one another, and discover who killed Jonet’s husband and why. Jonet is every inch her own woman and as their relationship progresses, Cole makes noises to the effect of wanting to tame her and curb her willfullness, but you get the sense as a reader that it’s definitely Jonet who has the upper hand, all the way to the end.
10.14.09
A week in reading: some quick hits
Fragile Eternity - I was looking forward to Melissa Marr’s third young adult novel meshing the world of faerie with that of mortal teenagers, but after finishing what is clearly the lead-in for a fourth novel, I’ve reached the end of the line. It’s my stop, time to get off. Urban fantasy is a hard sell for me in general, so it takes a deft hand and a unique voice to really make me give a book a shot. And Marr still has those things, but in Fragile Eternity her beautiful prose and compelling characters get lost in a whirlwind of faerie politics. And I’m sorry, but you start talking about this court and that court and rattling off the names of a dozen new faeries and I’m done for. I don’t want to have to create a flow chart to get through a book. Also, in Wicked Lovely and Ink Exchange, I loved seeing the struggle of human vs. faerie. In Fragile Eternity, humanity is an afterthought. Something to be noted when Aislinn mentions her gram or going to school (in passing; the Summer Queen seldom attends classes). It’s all faeries and wars and inter-court bickering and a “my soulmate is gone so I’m going to turn to the next best thing” story that I already watched play out with As the World Turns‘ Lily, Holden and Damian.
Something, Maybe and Stealing Heaven – Elizabeth Scott is a go-to read, a comfort read. Much like Sarah Dessen before her, you know Scott will deliver a funny, heartfelt tale about a young woman trying to find her way. The problem with reading these two books of hers in a row is that a formula emerged: irresponsible mother, absent father, snarky banter with the boy. I was trying to recall if her debut, Bloom, had a similar theme and then was horrified to realize I couldn’t remember anything beyond the title. I liked all three books, as well as Perfect You, but I don’t think I could rattle off the characters’ names without help. Whereas Living Dead Girl, that’s a book by Scott I’ll never forget. I tore through Something, Maybe and Stealing Heaven and was engaged while I was in them…but it’s like some of Scott’s novels are “a pleasant few hours’ diversion” and then you’ve got “rip out your spleen and hand it to you.”
I’m still reading the newly released anthology The Heart of Christmas, featuring novellas by Mary Balogh, Nicola Cornick and Courtney Milan. I’m having a tough time getting through Cornick’s piece, which feels like a standard rake/ingenue tale that happens to be set in cold weather. On the heels of Balogh’s “A Handful of Gold,” which was very sweet but featured a ludicrous instance of info dump within dialogue, I’m definitely dragging my feet. (It was Verity’s mother, outlining their finances and family connections. Who says things like, “The Reverend Ewing, your papa…?”) It’s ironic that Milan, the new kid on the block whose full-length debut isn’t even hitting shelves until early next year, has the most effective work in the anthology. “This Wicked Gift” stands apart because it’s not about the ton. Lavinia works in her family lending library, William White is a down-on-his-luck clerk and how they come to be together is really unique. Milan takes risks with the characters, with the set-up, and ends up delivering readers the true gift.
10.13.09
Heroine addiction: relatable women in fiction
There’s a lot of discussion in the romance blogosphere right now about heroines and what makes a good one — particularly whether a female protagonist must be likable to be effective. It’s kind of an interesting discussion for me as a reader and a writer, and as someone who is also ensconced firmly in another genre geared towards women: that of soaps. There’s no doubt that in daytime, it’s the bad girls who get the spotlight. For every sweet ingenue, every long-suffering Laura Spencer from General Hospital or Days of our Lives‘ Hope Brady, there is an Erica Kane or a Carly Benson that makes viewers shake their fists, gnash their teeth…and keep tuning in. And I’ll admit, I like the grayer characters more than the sweet ones. They’re more exciting! As Tallulah Bankhead once pointed out: good girls keep diaries, bad girls don’t have the time. But it’s also a little more basic than bad girl vs. good girl for me. I just want a character to be human. I don’t care if they’re nice or they’re bitchy, as long as they feel real.
And that authenticity does come from flaws, from characters who make mistakes just like we all do in life. Lucy, in Tessa Dare’s Goddess of the Hunt, is pig-headed, impulsive, and determined to get what she wants…and if she weren’t? The story wouldn’t be the same! Dare’s first scene, alone, wouldn’t exist. A polar opposite to the Lucys of the romance world is Percy, from Leanna Renee Hieber’s debut novel The Strangely Beautiful Tale of Miss Percy Parker. Percy is this lovely, meek, fragile thing who never says an offensive word to anyone and swoons at the drop of a hat. She’s perfect in everything, except her near albino-hood, which is supposed to set her apart as a freak but somehow only makes her more special and unique. Percy worked for many readers, but she didn’t work for me. Someone that nice and sweet and halo-ed…I couldn’t relate to her. That stopped me in my tracks long before I even asked myself, “Do I like her?”
Another of Dare’s heroines, Isabel Grayson from A Lady of Persuasion priggishly tries to impose her agenda of social reform on her husband. Believe me, that was annoying. But as much as I wanted to shake her, I got where she was coming from, appreciated that she wasn’t as sainted as she wanted to be, and liked that she made me kind of mad! I want a character to inspire strong emotions. I’m reminded of something Kyle Lowder often said to me about his character on The Bold and the Beautiful. Basically that if fans love Rick, hate Rick or love to hate Rick, it all means he’s doing his job. I feel the same way about a good author. If your lead characters inspire something other than a shrug and a “meh, I’ve seen this before,” you’re moving in the right direction. I don’t want to sigh, I don’t want to simper…I want to feel engaged by a person and their journey.
10.04.09
Damon: The Vampire Diaries’ sexy beast
In talking about soaps, I often talk about how predators and abusers of women are glorified as heroes, and how the more possessive, controlling and violent a male character is, the more it seems to speak to his machismo and his viability as a romantic lead. Nowhere is this motif more obvious, though, than in the myth of the vampire. The blood-drinking night stalker who ravishes virginal women in the night has been around for centuries, be it as Bram Stoker’s Dracula or Nosferatu. And every few years, the concept experiences a renaissance — whether at the hands of Anne Rice, or of Joss Whedon’s double threat of Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel, or the new fascination with True Blood and the Twilight franchise.
The CW’s offering to the genre is The Vampire Diaries. And while I was initially resistant to watching a show based on books I’d read as a teen, I find myself growing increasingly fascinated. And I am compelled and repelled, in turns, by the show’s most dynamic character: Damon Salvatore. He was a budding sociopath in the novels, but in the hands of Ian Somerhalder, who is hauntingly beautiful to look at and chillingly genial when Damon needs to be, he seems a thousand times worse. He’s this cold, carelessly abusive creature who treats women like playthings, and mimics the act of rape as he hunts them down and bites them…and I honestly don’t know what The Vampire Diaries is trying to do with that. Are they trying to deliberately subvert the idea of Stephenie Meyer’s chaste, virginal Edward Cullen-style vampire with this voraciously sexual beast who hungers for both sex and blood? Because I actually approve of that. Vampires are not fluffy bunnies and should not be portrayed as guys who just want to hold your hand. But I do not approve of the idea that Damon’s abuse of women and constant manipulation of their consent should be shrugged away because he’s handsome and charming. Is that what The Vampire Diaries wants us to do? I honestly haven’t figured it out.
I tend to give vampires slightly more leeway than human males because it’s their raison d’etre to break the skin, to draw blood. But I hope the show moves away from this aspect of Damon’s character, especially as they delve into their mythology and (hopefully) follow the path of the books and bring in other antagonists. Because the one thing that saves Damon from being the outright villain of the piece is that in his incredibly dysfunctional way, he does actually love his brother and Elena. Those two keep him connected to humanity. However, if the show keeps portraying him as a quasi-rapist, those connective threads will only grow more tenuous…and then break.
Make no mistake, I absolutely tune in to see what Damon will do next — and the rest of the show is interesting as well, especially when Stefan and Elena aren’t doing their best impressions of Edward and Bella — but they’re walking a thin line here. Damon’s combination of sexual magnetism and violence, and the mixed message it sends…it’s pretty damn disturbing on a network targeted at teenagers.
10.03.09
Once upon a time in India
I currently have two work-in-progress novels in play, and one of them uses a lot of storytelling to flesh out the themes for the main character. I’m trying to figure out if that’s a cop-out that takes away from what’s happening in the present/in “real time” or if it’s exactly what the story needs.
Because here’s the thing: I’m dealing with a lot of Hindu mythology, and it’s stuff that I know like the back of my hand, but my readers have no context for. And, similarly, I’ve built my main character as someone who needs major tutelage when it comes to her heritage. So, the way to educate both her and those who would potentially pick up this book is to have other characters tell her stories from our two great Sanskrit epics, the Ramayana and Mahabharata.
Oral tradition is a big part of how I know what I know. I read Amar Chitra Katha comic books as a kid and devoured C. Rajagopalachari’s translation of the Mahabharata, but it’s my mother’s stories that really steeped me in my culture. So, for me, it feels perfect natural to have stories be the avenue by which Tara (pronounced with a soft “th” sound) learns where she comes from.
Is that natural for readers, though? Is that interesting? Or is it more like, “Aw, man, I don’t care about the story of Savitri and Satyavan. Shut up.” Of course, that particular tale actually has some metaphorical resonance for my characters, as most of what I’m using does. But I guess I fear that the metaphors, the callbacks, are only going to make sense to me.
09.30.09
A Lady of Persuasion, by Tessa Dare
With the third novel in her debut trilogy, Tessa Dare effectively wins the triple crown, hits a grand slam, insert any other metaphor related to the number three here, etc. A Lady of Persuasion, much like Goddess of the Hunt and Surrender of a Siren before it, proves to be a truly enjoyable reading experience and a book that revitalizes and reconfigures the romantic historical genre.
I admit I had reservations going in, not having formed much of an opinion of Toby Aldridge and Isabel Grayson from their previous appearances in Dare’s work. Toby felt like a standard not-the-hero kind of guy and Isabel, in her brief appearance in Surrender of a Siren, seemed a staid reformer. But I forgot that, in essence, I was seeing Toby and Isabel through the eyes of others. If Toby was such a catch to Lucy or Sophia, where would their stories with Jeremy and Gray have been, right? Of course you never get a full picture of who a character is until it’s their perspective you’re looking through! And the story that Dare built around Toby and Bel was perfect. It fleshed them out, made them rich, beautiful characters, and delivered a wonderful payoff. (Let’s just say that a key scene towards the end had me laughing my ass off in a pub as I sipped a dwindling glass of pinot grigio.)
Dare again takes the conventions of your standard romance — a sudden proposal, an impulsive marriage between veritable strangers — and turns them on their ear. Toby and Isabel bloom under her careful hand, emerging as a man and woman trying to reconcile who they truly are with the expectations of who they ought to be.
Isabel, a twenty year old naif from Tortola, is so desperate to quell the passionate side of her nature, that she throws all that passion into good works and charitable causes. And Toby, still bruised from Sophia jilting him, sees in Isabel a chance to get back at Bel’s brother Gray, who he thinks “stole” Sophia from him. Only…not really. Quickly enough the reader gleans that Toby is just a man who wants to love and be loved, and this remarkable, unique beauty sets them both on a course to realizing what they truly want out of life.
I laughed with them, I choked up at the appropriate moments (Chapter Twenty-One, oh my goodness), and reveled in the inclusion of Lucy and Jem, Sophia and Gray, and the secondary story of Joss and Hetta trying to shed their protective layers and find love. Dare built a family, a community, in these books, and the camaraderie and banter and essence of these characters shines through. They’re genuinely funny, human and flawed, and incredibly memorable.
And, seriously, Dare needs to release Memoirs of a Wanton Dairymaid, which plays a key role in all three of her novels, as its own erotic novella. Because That Book must be a doozy!
09.25.09
Wicked For a Day, by Liz Carlyle
Wicked For a Day, by Liz Carlyle, like so many great romance novels that have come before it, suffers from Stupid Title-itis. It honestly gives the reader no idea as to what’s in the book, just feels slapped on, along with the obligatory clinch cover. I don’t know if Carlyle came up with it herself (If so, sorry! But I do feel your pain, as I hate coming up with titles and headlines) or if it was bestowed upon the book by the publisher. Either way, it’s too trite for a book this good.
Just a few pages in, I quickly realized that Wicked For a Day was part of an expanded universe. The family connections were incredibly detailed, with a genuine sense that the reader should know these people. But in a really believable way — a way that made me want to read the prior books. I think that’s the advantage of writing historicals and Regencies. Dealing with the London ton, you can build an entire social order and then continue to reference the same people as time goes by. It’s not like Susan Elizabeth Phillips’ What I Did For Love, where the author flew her heroine some BFFs from clear across the country just to give her character some weight. The inclusion of Jonet and Cole from A Woman Scorned and Rannoch and Evie from My False Heart, doesn’t take the place of giving Zoe and Mercer their own distinct personalities and their own richly crafted story.
And it’s definitely Zoe and Mercer’s story. Zoe Armstrong, the illegitimate and incredibly indulged daughter of the Marquis of Rannoch, has grown up with distant cousins Stuart, Lord Mercer, and his rakish brother Robin. Robin’s her best friend and serious Stuart is the one who is forever getting them out of their scrapes. However, when an ill-advised romp with Robin threatens to ruin Zoe’s reputation, it’s one scrape that Stuart may not be able to solve without his own heart becoming a casualty in the process. All three characters are finely drawn, and painfully human, and while the reader will probably want to spend the bulk of the book throwing something at Robin’s head, that Mercer and Zoe both love him and want the best for him —all the while realizing that they love each other — is a key element of the novel.
It’s an enjoyable read, with a beautifully crafted story and an entire cast of characters who feel authentic. Not for nothing, but Mercer and Robin’s mother, Jonet, is probably the savviest character in the whole piece. If she existed today, she’d probably have a Zoe/Mercer fan message board up and running and be sponsoring a fan fiction contest…while Zoe and Mercer themselves were still figuring out how to boot up the computer. Watching her watch her sons and Zoe figure out their lives is half the fun of Wicked For a Day. The other half is Zoe and Mercer themselves.